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You know, I have a lot of favourites films but I love watching Doraemon the most. Doraemon is a series of manga of Japan by Fujiko Fujio composed from 12 years month 1969 months to 4 years 1996 journal CoroCoro comic publisher Shogakukan. Well, I started watching it when I was a child. Doraemon has 6 main characters includes Nobita Nobi, Doraemon, Shizuka Minamoto, Suneo Honekawa, Dorami, Takeshi gouda. Moreover, Takeshi gouda has nickname is Giant. To be honest, the series content tells about the bad life of Nobita and the robotic cat Doraemon from the future who can help the boy's life become better. Besides, I am really into the friends of two characters in comics it makes me feel fancy.
You know, I have
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Doraemon
the most.
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Doraemon
is a series of manga of Japan by Fujiko
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Fujio
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composed from
12 years month 1969 months to 4 years 1996 journal
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CoroCoro
comic publisher
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Shogakukan
. Well, I
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started
watching it when I was a child.
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Doraemon
has 6 main characters includes
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Nobita
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Nobi
,
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Doraemon
,
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Shizuka
Minamoto,
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Suneo
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Honekawa
,
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Dorami
,
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Takeshi
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gouda
.
Moreover
,
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Takeshi
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gouda
has nickname is Giant. To be honest, the series content
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tells
about the
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bad
life of
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Nobita
and the robotic cat
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Doraemon
from the future who can
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help
the boy's life become better.
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, I am
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makes
me feel fancy.

IELTS essay Write about your favourite film

Essay
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1 paragraphs
122 words
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