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People have 24 hours for a day, that is a long time so we can do a lot of thing one day. In my daily routine, i usually help my mother with cleaning the floor. It is only a little simple work but with my mother that is a big support, that is why i try my best to make the floor become the most clean. I always clean the floor when i finish the school and back to home. Everywhere in my house, where have the dust i will clean it. Sometime, my mother tells me that my house can not be dirty if i am here, by me the house clean all the time, that is the reason for me to make an effort to hard working.
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People
have 24 hours for a day,
that is
a long time
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so
we can do
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a lot of thing
one day. In my daily routine,
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i
usually
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help
my mother with cleaning the floor. It is
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only
a
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little
simple work
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but
with my mother
that is
a
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big
support,
that is
why
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
try my best to
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make
the floor become the most
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clean
. I always
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clean
the floor when
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
finish the school and back to home. Everywhere in my
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house
, where have the dust
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
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clean
it. Sometime, my mother
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tells
me that my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
can not be dirty if
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am here, by me the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
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clean
all the time,
that is
the reason for me to
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make
an effort to
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
hard working
.
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IELTS essay Write about your daily work

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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