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The Covid-19 has changed the way we live

The Covid-19 has changed the way we live bOkBP
These days, due to the Corona Virus pandemic, many things have changed in our lives. First and foremost, the global economy is massively decreased because of the lack of trade, business, and production of goods. Which leads to the imbalance between supply and demand. Secondly, on a social level, people are now taking more care of there hygiene and health. The pandemic has taught us that protection and prevention is better than seeking cure. People now are washing their hands on a regular basis, and keeping distance from each other. Finally, on a personal level, a lot of people learned numerous useful things during the quarantine. As a result, they became different persons. For example, some of them learned a new language or new skills, ad other read many books To conclude, we can say that despite the negative effects the Covid-19 epidemic, it also has positively changed several aspects of lives
These days, due to the
Corona Virus
pandemic,
many
things have
changed
in our
lives
.

First
and foremost, the global economy is
massively
decreased
because
of the lack of trade, business, and production of
goods
. Which leads to the imbalance between supply and demand.
Secondly
, on a social level,
people
are
now
taking more care of there hygiene and health. The pandemic has taught us that protection and prevention is better than seeking cure.
People
now
are washing their hands on a regular basis, and keeping distance from each other.
Finally
, on a personal level,
a lot of
people
learned numerous useful things during the quarantine.
As a result
, they became
different
persons.
For example
,
some
of them learned a new language or new
skills
, ad other read
many
books

To conclude
, we can say that despite the
negative
effects the Covid-19 epidemic, it
also
has
positively
changed
several aspects of
lives
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IELTS essay The Covid-19 has changed the way we live

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
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5.0
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