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Write about the last travel you had. Write in detail as much as you can.

Write about the last travel you had. Write in detail as much as you can. m5K2N
One of the exciting and beautiful minutes in everybody's life is related to the travel without any doubt. The first to the end of travel can have interesting events that we can describe for everyone and share our good sense with others. Sometimes, after our description of the place where we went there, our friends and relatives may persuade to have a travel to that place. I went to the travel about 2 months ago. I and my family decided to went to the Mashhad. A holy and popular city among Iranian. Due to the COVID-19 pandemic, we had not have a travel since the beginning of the disease. It was very exciting for us that we can go there after 2 years. The journey for us has begun when we are going the road. We pleased from the environment and look at our surround. After that we arrived at Mashhad, we had been there for 4 days. We set a plan for trip in Mashhad to use our time in the best manner. On the first day, we went to the shrine of Imam Reza for praying and doing religious affairs. After that, the interesting and most important part of the journey started. We went to shopping and buy our needs such as clothes, toys and present for our relatives. Most of our travel time had been assigned to the shopping because women live shopping and anyone cannot change their opinions about the time of shopping. In addition, we went to the Koohsangi Park and had a funny time. We repeated these works in all of 4 days. We always try to please the travel and have a funny time and do not think our routine. The journey help us to have relaxed and prepare ourselves for our daily works.
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minutes in everybody's life
is related
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without any doubt. The
first
to the
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end
of
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can have interesting
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events
that we can
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describe
for everyone and share our
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good
sense with others.
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Sometimes
, after our description of the place where we
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went
there, our friends and relatives may persuade to have a
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travel
to that place.

I
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to the
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about 2 months ago. I and my family decided to
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went
to the Mashhad. A holy and popular city among Iranian. Due to the COVID-19 pandemic, we had not
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a
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travel
since the beginning of the disease. It was
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very
exciting for us that we can go there after 2 years. The journey for us has begun when we are going the road. We
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pleased
from the environment and look at our surround. After that we arrived at Mashhad, we had been there for 4 days. We set a plan for trip in Mashhad to
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use
our
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in the best manner. On the
first
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to the shrine of Imam Reza for praying and doing religious affairs.

After that, the interesting and most
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important
part of the journey
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. We
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and
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our needs such as clothes, toys and present for our relatives. Most of our
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time
had
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women
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live
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and anyone cannot
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change
their opinions about the
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time
of
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shopping
.
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, we
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to the
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Koohsangi
Park and had a
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funny
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time
. We repeated these works in all of 4 days.

We always try to
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the
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travel
and have a
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funny
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time
and do not
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our routine. The journey
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us to have relaxed and prepare ourselves for our daily works.
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IELTS essay Write about the last travel you had. Write in detail as much as you can.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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