Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Although cars are damaging environment, manufacturing and using of cars are still increase. why is that increase? What can be done to reduce such increase?

Although cars are damaging environment, manufacturing and using of cars are still increase. why is that increase? What can be done to reduce such increase? PX6rK
New era of technology and innovation has resulted in development of automobile industry. Nowadays cars are becoming an important means of communication as well as part of basic necessity despite the fact that it creates hazard in the quality of environment. This essay will first state the negative impact on environment due to variety of uses of cars and secondly after that, it will describe some preventive measures to reduce such an increased use. In these present days, vehicles are becoming integral part of the modern society. It has got numerous use in human’s daily lives for instant, transportation of goods, transferring heavy industry equipment as well as carrying passengers. Such an increase use has created many issues which are harmful for environment. For example, vehicles use oil, gas or other bio-fuel products as a source of energy. Using such energies leads to emission of carbon-di-oxide which is increasing the temperature level and resulting in increased hit in the atmosphere. Despite these negative impacts, the use is constantly rising and it is becoming a basic necessity for people. In case of developed countries, people are using more cars to reach their workplace within short time and for everyday purchase from the local super shops, cars became a part of regular life. However, such an increase use of cars in daily life needs to be controlled and numerous measures can be undertaken to control such increase. Firstly, the government can take initiatives to impose rules and regulations so that there will limits in the number of cars a family or a person can use. Secondly, people should be encouraged to use public transports more. For this, things like increased seating capacity, quality of amenities, time schedule as well as concerns for old people and pregnant women need to be focused. Last but not the least is the awareness rising among people and manufactures of cars. By communicating the impact that vehicles are making, manufactures should be encouraged to develop electric vehicles and people should be inspired to use electric vehicles or electronic bicycles. To sum up, it can be said that, cars has become a major part of human as it gives the comforts and reduces communication hassle. Though it creates hazard in environment, people and manufacturing companies should be concerned while producing and using it so that it creates less harm to the environment. After it is our plant and we have the responsibility to protect it.
New era of technology and innovation has resulted in development of automobile industry. Nowadays
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
are becoming an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
means of communication
as well
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of basic necessity despite the fact that it creates hazard in the quality of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. This essay will
first
state the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
due to variety of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
and
secondly
after that, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
preventive measures to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
such an increased
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.

In these present days,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
are becoming integral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of the modern society. It has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
numerous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
in human’s daily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
for instant, transportation of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
, transferring heavy industry equipment
as well
as carrying passengers. Such an increase
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
has created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
issues which are harmful for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
For example
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
oil, gas or other bio-fuel products as a source of energy. Using such energies leads to emission of
Possible spelling mistake found.
carbon-di-oxide
which is increasing the temperature level and resulting in increased hit in the atmosphere. Despite these
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impacts, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
is
constantly
rising and it is becoming a basic necessity for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. In case of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developed countries
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are using more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
to reach their workplace within short time and for everyday
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
from the local super shops,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
became a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of regular life.

However
, such an increase
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
in daily life needs to
be controlled
and numerous measures can be undertaken to control such increase.
Firstly
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can take initiatives to impose
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that there will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "limit"
limits
in the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
a family or a person can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
Secondly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should
be encouraged
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
public transports more. For this, things like increased seating capacity, quality of amenities, time schedule
as well
as concerns for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and pregnant women need to
be focused
. Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not the least is the awareness rising among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and manufactures of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
. By communicating the impact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
are making, manufactures should
be encouraged
to develop electric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should
be inspired
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
electric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
or electronic bicycles.

To sum up, it can
be said
that,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
has become a major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
part
of human as it gives the comforts and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduces
communication hassle. Though it creates hazard in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and manufacturing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
should
be concerned
while producing and using it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it creates less harm to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. After it is our
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
plant and
we have the responsibility to protect it.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Although cars are damaging environment, manufacturing and using of cars are still increase. why is that increase? What can be done to reduce such increase?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
407 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Although cars are damaging environment, manufacturing and using of cars are still increase. why is that increase? What can be done to reduce such increase?