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Write about plants and its life

Write about plants and its life PMPLg
Plants “He who plants a tree, plants a hope” - Lucy Larcom. As we know, plants play an important role in our life. The tree give off oxygen and provide food, wood for people and animals. They can reduce the flood and the erosion because the roots can keep the soil to reduce the runoff. The trees can make the scenery beautiful and help us to relax. Moreover, have you ever wondered how trees grow? Firstly a tree starts as a seed, when it has the right condition, it splits open and sprouts. By the effects of the roots, the shoot leaves pokes above ground. That process’s called germination. Secondly, a shoot becomes a seedling. It’s the time when the trees is still weak and need to be saved. Thirdly, a tree becomes mature, it has more branches and can produce flowers and fruits. Fourthly, the tree is older and its survival depends on outside effects, at that time, the tree is called decline. Finally, it will die, called a snag and the cycle begins again. In short, plants bring to us many benefits and it takes a long time to plant a tree so that we should plant more trees and reduce deforestation.
Plants

“He who
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,
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a hope”
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Lucy
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Larcom
. As we know,
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plants
play an
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important
role in our life. The
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tree
give off oxygen and provide food, wood for
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people
and animals. They can
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reduce
the flood and the erosion
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because
the roots can
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keep
the soil to
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reduce
the runoff. The
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trees
can
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make
the scenery
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beautiful
and
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help
us to relax.
Moreover
, have you ever wondered how
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trees
grow?
Firstly
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tree
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starts
as a seed, when it has the right condition, it splits open and sprouts. By the effects of the roots, the shoot
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leaves
pokes above ground. That process’s called germination.
Secondly
, a shoot becomes a seedling. It’s the time when the
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trees
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is
still
weak and need to
be saved
.
Thirdly
, a
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tree
becomes mature, it has more branches and can produce flowers and fruits.
Fourthly
, the
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tree
is older and its survival depends on outside effects, at that time, the
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tree
is called
decline.
Finally
, it will
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die
, called a snag and the cycle
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begins
again. In short,
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plants
bring to us
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many
benefits and it takes a long time to
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plant
a
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tree
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so
that we should
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plant
more
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trees
and
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reduce
deforestation.
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IELTS essay Write about plants and its life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
204 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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