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Life in the city is full of activity. Early in the morning hundreds of people rush out of their homes in the manner ants do when their nest is broken. Soon the streets are full of traffic. Shops and offices open, students flock to their schools and the day's work begins. The city now throb with activity, and it is full of noise. Hundreds of sight-seers, tourists and others visit many places of interest in the city while businessmen from various parts of the world arrive to transact business. Then towards evening, the offices and day schools begin to close. Many of the shops too close. There is now a rush for buses and other means of transport. Everyone seems to be in a hurry to reach home. As a result of this rush, many accidents occur. One who has not been to the city before finds it hard to move about at this time. Soon, however, there is almost no activity in several parts of the city. These parts are usually the business centres. With the coming of night, another kind of actịvity begins. The streets are now full of colorful lights. The air is cooler and life becomes more leisurely. People now seek entertainment. Many visit the cinemas, parks and clubs, while others remain indoors to watch television or listen to the radio. Some visit friends and relatives and some spend their time reading books and magazines. Those who are interested in politics discuss the latest political developments. At the same time, hundreds of crimes are committed. Thieves and robbers who wait for the coming of night become active, and misfortune descends upon many. For the greed of a few, many are killed, and some live in constant fear. To bring criminals to justice, the officers of the law are always on the move. Workers and others who seek advancement in their careers attend educational institutions which are open till late in the night. Hundreds of them sit for various examinations every year. The facilities and opportunities that the people in the city have to further their studies and increase their knowledge of human affairs are indeed many. As a result, the people of the city are usually better informed than those of the village, where even a newspaper is sometimes difficult to get. The city could, therefore, be described as a place of ceaseless activity. Here, the drama of life is enacted every day.
Life in the city is
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full
of
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activity
. Early in the morning hundreds of
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people
rush out of their homes in the manner ants do when their nest
is broken
.
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Soon
the streets are
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full
of traffic. Shops and offices open, students flock to their schools and the day's work
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begins
. The city
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now
throb with
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activity
, and it is
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full
of noise. Hundreds of sight-seers, tourists
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and others
visit
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many
places of interest in the city while businessmen from various parts of the world arrive to transact business.

Then towards evening, the offices and day schools
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begin
to close.
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Many
of the shops too close. There is
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now
a rush for buses and
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other
means of transport. Everyone seems to be in a hurry to reach home.
As a result
of this rush,
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many
accidents occur. One
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who
has not been to the city
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before
finds it
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hard
to
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move
about at this time.
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Soon
,
however
, there is almost no
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activity
in several parts of the city. These parts are
usually
the business
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centres
. With the coming of night, another kind of
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actịvity
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begins
. The streets are
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now
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full
of colorful lights. The air is cooler and life becomes more
leisurely
.
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People
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now
seek entertainment.
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Many
visit the cinemas, parks and clubs, while others remain indoors to
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watch
television or listen to the radio.
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Some
visit friends and relatives and
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some
spend their time reading books and magazines. Those
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who
are interested
in politics discuss the latest political developments. At the same time, hundreds of crimes
are committed
. Thieves and robbers
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who
wait for the coming of night become active, and misfortune descends upon
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many
. For the greed of a few,
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many
are killed
, and
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some
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live
in constant fear. To bring criminals to justice, the officers of the law are always on the
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move
.

Workers
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and others
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who
seek advancement in their careers attend educational institutions which are open till late in the night. Hundreds of them sit for various examinations every year. The facilities and opportunities that the
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people
in the city
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have to
further
their studies and increase their knowledge of human affairs are
indeed
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many
.
As a result
, the
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people
of the city are
usually
better informed than those of the village, where even a newspaper is
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sometimes
difficult to
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get
.

The city could,
therefore
, be
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described
as a place of ceaseless
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activity
. Here, the drama of life
is enacted
every day.
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IELTS essay Write about life in the city

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
407 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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