Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

what do you think about tourism

what do you think about tourism YR0gN

Everything has two sides and so does tourism. Tourism has both benefits and negative impacts on the environment. In terms of benefits, tourism brings us economic and employment benefits. Countries with a lot of natural sights like China, or the United States can derive huge economic benefits from foreign tourists, so having more tourists will increase economic revenue significantly. In addition, tourism also brings many jobs such as tour guides, hotel managers, which can reduce unemployment in many small but beautiful countries like Vietnam and Iceland. On the other hand, tourism does more harm than good. Tourists outnumber the population, which affects things like traffic, cultural preservation. Many tourists also have bad behaviors such as making noise, being uncultured, drinking alcohol, smoking in public places. Tourists themselves also contribute a large part to water pollution. For example, in Thailand, the number of beach tourists increases every year, but the amount of waste generated also increases. Increased tourist numbers also lead to higher house prices as people look to invest in housing on Airbnb or other room-renting platforms. Growing recognition of overtourism could push visitors into more environmentally and culturally friendly tourism to save delicate sights for generations

Everything has two sides and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 does You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
Tourism
 has both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprosperityusehelpprofitassistanceperk
benefits
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impacts on the environment. In terms of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprosperityusehelpprofitassistanceperk
benefits
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
 brings us economic and employment You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprosperityusehelpprofitassistanceperk
benefits
. Countries with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 natural sights like China, or the United States can derive huge economic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprosperityusehelpprofitassistanceperk
benefits
 from foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 having more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 will increase economic revenue significantly
. In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
also
 brings This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 jobs such as tour guides, hotel managers, which can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 unemployment in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 countries like Vietnam and Iceland. On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
 does more harm than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
Tourists
 outnumber the population, which affects things like traffic, cultural preservation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
also
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 behaviors such as making noise, being uncultured
, drinking alcohol, smoking in public places. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
Tourists
 themselves also
 contribute a large part to water pollution. For example
, in Thailand, the number of beach You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 increases every year, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the amount of waste generated also
 increases. Increased You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourist
 numbers also
 lead to higher This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 prices as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 look to invest in housing on Airbnb or other room-renting platforms. Growing recognition of Possible spelling mistake found.over tourism
overtourism
 could push visitors into more environmentally
 and culturally
 friendly You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtouristrytravel
tourism
 to save delicate sights for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphgenerations.generations!generations?generations:generations,generations;
generations