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Write about a special occasion you like best.

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Vietnamese Teachers' Day is my personal favorite. The event took place in the schoolyard. Opening ceremony, speech reading, cultural acts, and closing ceremony were among the events held. Teachers will be dressed in ao dai and vests on that day. Uniforms will be worn by the students. Vietnamese Teachers' Day is one of my favorite holidays because it allows students to express their gratitude to their teachers.
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IELTS essay Write about a special occasion you like best.

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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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