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The event that year suddenly became famous around the world, sadly that popularity came from tragedy, from the bloody massacre of the US army. Half a century has passed, and thousands of works of art, books, and movies both at home and abroad have been written about this event. We are the young generation born after the unification of the country, inheriting a peaceful, prosperous and happy life. When I came to Son My to make this video, it was not for the purpose of rekindling the pain so that My Lai would once again bleed, but just wanted to not let the past be forgotten and also for today's young generation to understand that The peaceful life that we not only exchanged with the blood of millions of officers and soldiers, but also many innocent lives there.
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. We are the young generation born after the unification of the country, inheriting a peaceful, prosperous and happy life. When I came to Son My to
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's young generation to understand that The peaceful life that we not
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exchanged with the blood of millions of officers and soldiers,
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IELTS essay write about a famous place in your hometown

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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