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Write a story you know in the past

Write a story you know in the past Mrl3q
Stewart fell in love with Jane. They decided get married, but there was a problem for both. They had a dog and the dogs hated each other. Stewart and Jane didn't want to get rid of the dogs. They decided live apart while the dogs alive. They lived about 40 miles apart about three years. The dogs didn't see each other very often. They life were very expensive and spend a lot of money on phone calls and travel. Last week Jane's dog died. Jane went to live with Stewart. Jane said it wasn't easy to live apart. I didn't love my dog than Stewart but I didn't want to give her up
Stewart fell in
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with Jane. They decided
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there was a problem for both. They had a
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dog
and the
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dogs
hated each other. Stewart and Jane didn't want to
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get
rid of the
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dogs
. They decided
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live
apart while the
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dogs
alive. They
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lived
about
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apart about three years. The
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dogs
didn't
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see
each other
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They life
were
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expensive and spend
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a lot of
money on phone calls and travel. Last week Jane's
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dog
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died
. Jane went to
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live
with Stewart. Jane said it wasn't easy to
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apart. I didn't
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my
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dog
than Stewart
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I didn't want to give her
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IELTS essay Write a story you know in the past

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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