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Write a short paragraph about your country.

Write a short paragraph about your country. GLDrB
There has been a general improvement in the standard of living. People live in better houses, drive nicer cars and eat higher-quality food than they did twenty years ago. In addition, there has been an upward trend in the number of people living in big cities because they can have better education and job opportunities than those in small villages. The government has spent a lot of money on tourism, so more and more tourists are coming to my country every year. However, this number has decreased due to the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic.
There has been a general improvement in the standard of living.
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People
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live
in better
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houses
, drive nicer cars and eat higher-quality food than they did twenty years ago.
In addition
, there has been an upward trend in the number of
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people
living in
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big
cities
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because
they can have better education and job opportunities than those in
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small
villages. The
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government
has spent
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a lot of
money on tourism,
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so
more and more tourists are coming to my country every year.
However
, this number has decreased due to the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic.
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IELTS essay Write a short paragraph about your country.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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