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Where did you go for the last vacation

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My last vacation was two months ago, it was on Jeddah it was an incredible trip and special, because i travelled by my self from Riyadh to Jeddah. I visit my aunt house and i was staying there for one week also i visit the beach and drive a boat, obviously it was one of the most specials trips in my life. I hope i visit Jeddah again and also i missed my family. The main reason for my trip that i got 97% on my test the test is called qodorat from qiyas it is popular in Saudi Arabia it is important for the university without this exam you will not be able for studying at the university.
My last vacation was two months ago, it was on
Jeddah
it was an incredible trip and special,
because
i
travelled by my self from Riyadh to
Jeddah
. I visit my aunt
house
and
i
was staying there for one week
also
i
visit the beach and drive a boat,
obviously
it was one of the most
specials
trips in my life. I hope
i
visit
Jeddah
again and
also
i
missed my family. The main reason for my trip that
i
got
97% on my
test
the
test
is called
qodorat
from
qiyas
it is popular in Saudi Arabia it is
important
for the university without this exam you will not be able for studying at the university.
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IELTS essay Where did you go for the last vacation

Essay
  American English
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119 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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