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Impacts on the Australian economy

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After Australia supported a call for a global inquiry into China’s early handling of Covid-19, tensions between Australia and China more drag on, it will take a heavy toll on the Australian economy. In particular, the decrease in beef and barley exports to China are two major impacts on the Australian economy. Beef is one of Australia's exports that suffers a lot when tensions between the two countries drag on. Specifically, on December 7 and December 8, China issued a ban on beef imports from Meramist beef processing companies, respectively. As a result, Australian beef exports to China are down 34% in 2020 and peak in early 2021 at an average of 14, 000 tonnes per month. With the impact of high tariffs from China, Australian companies have suffered a lot of economic damage from inventory, as well as have to face finding new markets. Besides, the Australian economy also suffered a lot when it lost a large amount of wheat exports. Besides, the Australian economy also suffered a lot when it lost a large number of wheat exports. China's Ministry of Commerce in May 2020 announced the imposition of an 80. 5% tax on Australian barley from May 19. There for, Australia has to look for other markets and suffer many losses. Because China has always been Australia's big wheat consumer market and lost the opportunity to some other countries that always want to invade the wheat market in China. Argentina is a case in point, the country aims to ship to China 250, 000 tons of barley this year, according to CNN. The impact of beef and wheat exports has taken a toll on the Australian economy. Australia's trade surplus with China will shrink further as tensions between the two countries grow. To be able to deal with many losses when China imposes high tariffs, Australia will have to work hard to find new markets as well as find many other diplomatic measures with China.
After Australia supported a call for a global inquiry into China’s early handling of Covid-19, tensions between Australia and China more drag on, it will take a heavy toll on the Australian
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to China are two major impacts on the Australian economy.

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that suffers a
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in China. Argentina is a case in point, the
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aims to ship to China 250, 000 tons of barley this year, according to CNN.

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has taken a toll on the Australian
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