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What are the wishes in your life?

What are the wishes in your life? ELLWQ
Everyone has their own wishes. Wishes are the thing that inspired people to spend their lives, not just dreaming about it but it also can be a path to success. It is common that a person can dream and wish how their lives would be in the future. It also improves your brain with creative and passionate thinking, not just in children but including adults as well. With the wish, getting on the path to our goal is easier than doing things we don’t want to. We might not complete all of our wishes in the past, don’t regret it because we can’t turn back and do anything with it so if you want to do something just do it, you only live once. You can’t change anything in the past but you can plan your future. Firstly, I also have my own wishes, and the main one is enrolled in the Bachelor of Political Science, Thammasat University. This thing has been one of my wishes for ages. With my interest in politics and relations between countries are extremely made me interest in this major. As I grew up, I saw a lot of government candidates that have the potential and ability to work in the parliament and that has always been inspired me. I started to figure myself what I really wanted to be in the future. I found out about this major and consist with my interest, I instantly knew this is the way I want to be in the future. After I knew about myself, studying in the Bachelor of Political Science, Thammasat University is one of my wishes. Secondly, another one of my wishes is I want my family and people around me to have a good health with their body including their mental. In my family, we always wish each of us to have good health on an important day as a Birthday. In my opinion, I feel like being healthy is important. Having a good relationship and having my own family are also in my wishes. It is maybe a usual thing that everybody might want it as well because having a good relationship is a nice thing. As for all of my wishes I describe they are just a few of it, I don’t even know that all of them are going to be the way I want it to be or not. But to be honest my wishes made me want to spend my life with those goals. It’s like you are playing a game and trying to complete tasks in the game. You might not complete or finish all tasks but that is not the point of it. Enjoying and having fun with your life is the main point of spending life. Everyone got their own wishes, some of you might regret or sad about things you haven’t done in the past. But don’t be, you can’t change anything. From now on just think “You only live once, so do whatever you want to. ” Be positive, kind to yourself, and enjoy life is the way you want to spend it.
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are the thing that inspired
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people
to spend their
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lives
, not
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just
dreaming about it
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but
it
also
can be a path to success. It is common that a person can dream and
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wish
how their
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lives
would be in the future. It
also
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improves
your brain with creative and passionate thinking, not
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just
in children
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but
including adults
as well
. With the
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wish
, getting on the path to our goal is easier than doing things we don’t
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want
to. We
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might
not complete all of our
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wishes
in the past, don’t regret it
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because
we can’t turn back and do anything with it
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so
if you
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want
to do something
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just
do it, you
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only
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live
once. You can’t
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change
anything in the past
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but
you can plan your future.

Firstly
, I
also
have my
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, and the main one
is enrolled
in the Bachelor of Political Science,
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Thammasat
University. This thing has been one of my
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wishes
for ages. With my interest in politics and relations between countries are
extremely
made me interest in this major. As I grew up, I
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saw
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a lot of
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government
candidates that have the potential and ability to work in the parliament and that has always
been inspired
me. I
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started
to figure myself what I
really
wanted to be in the future. I found out about this major and consist with my interest, I
instantly
knew this is the way I
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want
to be in the future. After I knew about myself, studying in the Bachelor of Political Science,
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Thammasat
University is one of my wishes.

Secondly
, another one of my
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wishes
is I
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want
my family and
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people
around me to have a
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good
health with their body including their mental. In my family, we always
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wish
each of us to have
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good
health on an
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important
day as a Birthday. In my opinion, I feel like being healthy is
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important
.
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Having
a
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good
relationship and
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having
my
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own
family are
also
in my
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wishes
. It is maybe a usual thing that everybody
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might
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want
it
as well
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because
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having
a
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good
relationship is a nice thing.

As for all of my
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I
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describe
they are
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just
a few of it, I don’t even know that all of them are going to be the way I
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want
it to be or not.
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But
to be honest my
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wishes
made me
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want
to spend my
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life
with those goals. It’s like you are playing a game and trying to complete tasks in the game. You
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might
not complete or finish all tasks
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but
that is
not the point of it. Enjoying and
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having
fun with your
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life
is the main point of spending
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life
. Everyone
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got
their
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own
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wishes
,
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some
of you
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might
regret or sad about things you haven’t done in the past.
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But
don’t be, you can’t
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change
anything. From
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now
on
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just
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think
“You
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live
once,
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so
do whatever you
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want
to. ” Be
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positive
, kind to yourself, and enjoy
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life
is the way you
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want
to spend it.
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IELTS essay What are the wishes in your life?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
520 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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