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Write a paragraph about the reasons for wearing uniform at school.

Write a paragraph about the reasons for wearing uniform at school. wK5Lm
Nowadays, uniform is wore in every school in the world which is necessary for some mains reason will be dicussed in the upcoming statement. To begin with, each school has their own uniform symbolize for the personal image of the school and it is compulsory for students to wear uniform at least 3 days per weeks. For example, student who do not wearing uniform right to regulation wil be considered as a violation of school discipline. Moreover, wearing uniform makes student feel equal in every respects that despite they rich or poor, once wore uniform, every one are the same. And the last one, with the school uniform, students do not need to think what to wear for the next day. In conclusion, these are some benefits of wearing uniforms at school that student student should be aware of and be proud of the school they are studing.
Nowadays,
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uniform
is
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wore
in every
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school
in the world which is necessary for
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some
mains reason will be
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dicussed
in the upcoming statement.

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begin
with, each
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school
has their
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own
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uniform
symbolize for the personal image of the
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school
and it is compulsory for
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students
to wear
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uniform
at least 3 days per weeks.
For example
,
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student
who do not
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wearing
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uniform
right to regulation
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wil
be considered
as a violation of
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school
discipline.
Moreover
, wearing
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uniform
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makes
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student
feel equal in every
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respects
that despite they rich or poor, once wore
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uniform
, every one are the same. And the last one, with the
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school
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uniform
,
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students
do not need to
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think
what to wear for the
next
day.

In conclusion
, these are
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benefits of wearing
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uniforms
at
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school
that
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student
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student
should be aware of and be proud of the
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school
they are
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studing
.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about the reasons for wearing uniform at school.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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