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Write a paragraph about current trend and why it is popular

Write a paragraph about current trend and why it is popular 2xDQM
Due to the fact of technological advancements, online shopping has become increasingly popular. especially these days because of the pandemic we have to stay home and shop online so purchasing items online is the greatest option for people who need to buy anything. Personally, I think shopping online makes shopping easier; people can get what they want with just a few simple action. In addition, it is a faster form of shopping since individuals can buy items without having to go to stores. Finally, online shopping allows people to make more comparisons between different brands and products. In conclusion, for all reasons mentioned above and increase the busyness of life٫ shopping online has become popular and will develop much more in the future.
Due to the fact of technological advancements,
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online
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shopping
has become
increasingly
popular.
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especially
these days
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because
of the pandemic we
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have to
stay home and shop
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online
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so
purchasing items
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online
is the greatest option for
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people
who need to
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buy
anything.

Personally
, I
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think
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shopping
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online
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makes
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shopping
easier;
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people
can
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get
what they want with
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just
a few simple action.
In addition
, it is a faster form of
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shopping
since individuals can
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buy
items without having to go to stores.
Finally
,
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online
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shopping
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allows
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people
to
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make
more comparisons between
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different
brands and products.

In conclusion
, for all reasons mentioned above and increase the busyness of
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life٫
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shopping
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online
has become popular and will develop much more in the future.

IELTS essay Write a paragraph about current trend and why it is popular

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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