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Write a paragraph about advantages of smartphone

Write a paragraph about advantages of smartphone YmEkN

Smartphones are now widely available all around the world and we all almost use it because of their many advantages. First of all, smartphones provide many information and knowledge for learning with the help of internet. Due to Covid 19, Smartphones help us to interact with everyone, especially, students can study at home with teachers through many social apps. Thus, we have had little effect in cutting down on the COVID-19 pandemic. Thirdly, we spend a lot of time in the house and smartphones make us more interested, such as listening to music or playing video games after a long time doing work. Fourthly, to save your memories or your beautiful views, smartphones will help you to record all of that. In conclusion, smartphones, which are the best invention in the world, have made life more comfortable and easier

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widely
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world and
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use
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because
 of their This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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First of all
, smartphones provide Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much information", "a good deal of information".much informationa good deal of information
many information
 and knowledge for learning with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of internet. Due to Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
Covid 19
, Smartphones This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us to interact with everyone, especially
, students can study at home with teachers through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 social apps. Thus
, we have had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 effect in cutting down on the COVID-19 pandemic. Thirdly
, we spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and smartphones This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 us more interested, such as listening to music or playing video games after a long time doing work. Fourthly
, to save your memories or your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 views, smartphones will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to record all of that. In conclusion
, smartphones, which are the best invention in the world, have made life more comfortable and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragrapheasier.easier!easier?easier:easier,easier;
easier