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Have good parent by training

Have good parent by training 1mLbG

I believe the result of having healthy citizens physicly and mentaly is good father and mother. If people live in safe area where they can find their intelligences and do favorite activities, jobs they feel well and it's the keys of this goal. Then not only schools but also the numerous sections like government, family and parent should done their duties carefully. And schools maynot done it alonely eventhough most teacher are at school for distinct lessons and what are academy outdoord end? When young childeren spend their crucial moment of lives at school can learn how to deal with difficulties and troubles and they become punctual, responsible, sociable through out their educational and socials duties. Government stablish rules to keep everything in right place espeialy at good servics such as health care, insurance and protect parent when they have infant. I mean if the balance rate of population is essencial for them insist in the imminent of them is vital too then facilate every services for it. In my opinion parent are the basment of society and the most important their obligation is growing independent youth and let them freedom to experience and find themselves Schools, families, governments attitude and action make students future who some of them desire to be dad or mom.

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live
 in safe area where they can find their intelligences and do favorite activities, jobs they feel well and it's the keys of this goal. Then not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
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 they become punctual, responsible, sociable Did you mean "throughout"?throughout
through out
 their educational and socials duties.

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Government
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stablish
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rules
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keep
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espeialy
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good
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servics
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essencial
 for them insist in The phrase 'the imminent of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
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facilate
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services
 for it.

In my opinion parent are the Possible spelling mistake found.basement
basment
 of society and the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 their obligation is growing independent youth and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 them freedom to experience and find themselves

Schools, families, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 attitude and action This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 students future who This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them desire to be dad or mom. 