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write a paragraph (150 words) about " Lunar Tet Holiday "

write a paragraph (150 words) about " Lunar Tet Holiday " Ol8pp

Lunar Tet holiday is popular fesival in Vien Nam. It is celebrated on December 31st - the first of new year, during 4 days. Everyone of Viet Nam are joyful of Lunar Tet holiday. Before Tet, people shopping for foods, drinks, beautiful colorful clothing; repair and decor the house, make Chung cakes and buy peach blossom. During Tet, people visit their grandparents, parents, relaties, teacher and friend; children receive a lot of luckey money on these day. Besides they visit the pagoda, the churches to pray for a good health, happiness and wealth. At that time the pagoda or churches is very crowded with people. Lunar Tet holiday is specialize because this is the time that reunited family, they all did everything together and Tet is the beginning of the year. Vietnamese people is very happy and hopeful

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because
 this is the time that reunited family, they all did everything together and Tet is the beginning of the year. Vietnamese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
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