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Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a product you have bought recently. You should use the following prompts

Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a product you have bought recently. You should use the following prompts mWA0N
I have received a very precious gift from my sister on my 18th birthday. It was a laptop. My sister has always been very generous, but this time even I was surprised by her generosity. It is so difficult to describe the laptop in words, but I would just tell you something about it. It was an i5 and it has black. I don't know the price of the laptop as it was a gift but it has been priceless for me. Whenever someone looks at the laptop the person asks me about the laptop and tells me how good it is. I am not personally an IT professional so I would not be able to explain this electronic device most adequately, but I still want to say that it is not only stylish but also useful. This gift has been very beneficial for me. It has helped me both educationally and socially. I use my laptop whenever I have to do an assignment or report. I also talk or communicate with my friends by using different websites and applications. I can say that my life would have been boring and slow if I had not had this beautiful gift. That is the reason I always tell my sister how thankful I am to her for giving me suck a useful thing that has helped me a lot.
I have received a
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very
precious
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gift
from my sister on my 18th birthday. It was a
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laptop
. My sister has always been
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very
generous,
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but
this time even I
was surprised
by her generosity. It is
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so
difficult to
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describe
the
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laptop
in words,
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but
I would
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just
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tell
you something about it. It was an i5 and it has black. I don't know the price of the
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laptop
as it was a
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gift
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but
it has been priceless for me. Whenever someone looks at the
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laptop
the person asks me about the
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laptop
and
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tells
me how
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good
it is. I am not
personally
an IT professional
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so
I would not be able to
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explain
this electronic device most
adequately
,
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but
I
still
want to say that it is not
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only
stylish
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but
also
useful. This
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gift
has been
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very
beneficial for me. It has
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helped
me both
educationally
and
socially
. I
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use
my
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laptop
whenever I
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have to
do an assignment or report. I
also
talk or communicate with my friends by using
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different
websites and applications.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can say that my life would have been boring and slow if I had not had this
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beautiful
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gift
.
That is
the reason I always
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tell
my sister how thankful I am to her for giving me suck a useful thing that has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me a lot.

IELTS essay Write a paragraph (120-150 words) about a product you have bought recently. You should use the following prompts

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
228 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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