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Internet in modern life and disadvantages of it.

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We live in the era of technology and communication, here we can't think a single day to pass without internet. Our whole activists such as office, home, entertainment, sports, medical services, government services all depend on imternet. From adults to Children all depend on Internet for thair daily task. Now a day online classes are moat popular all over the world. And in this pendamic situation people are engaged in online business in a massive amount.
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IELTS essay Internet in modern life and disadvantages of it.

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76 words
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