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Write a descriptive essay of about 200 words about the perfect place to relax.

Write a descriptive essay of about 200 words about the perfect place to relax. 6pNml
Everyone has their own special place where he or she can find relaxation and calm. For some people, it could be a quiet place such as a bedroom or a rooftop. For others, it could be a hustling place full of people and music. But for me, my bedroom is a perfect place to calm and refresh myself when I feel stressed or need to concentrate on something. People who have ever entered my bedroom all agree that it brings a beautiful peace and coziness. The room is painted with a pink pastel colour, an adorable colour with a calming effect. I do not decorate my bedroom with many ornaments, since I follow minimalism. Inside my bedroom, there is only a small study desk, a bookshelf, a wardrobe and a bed. However, not only is the room not so bleak, but also very airy thanks to the presence of four windows, on which four pots of different plants are placed. Whenever I need to relieve bad moods or contemplate something, I usually lock the door and sit still in my bedroom. The pink colour of the room always calms me down when I enter and the cool breeze blowing from the windows makes me feel refreshed.
Everyone has their
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where he or she can find relaxation and calm. For
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, it could be a quiet
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place
such as a
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bedroom
or a rooftop. For others, it could be a hustling
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place
full of
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people
and music.
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for me, my
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bedroom
is a perfect
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place
to calm and refresh myself when I feel
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stressed
or need to concentrate on something.

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People
who have ever entered my
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bedroom
all
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agree
that it brings a
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beautiful
peace and coziness. The room
is painted
with a pink pastel
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colour
, an adorable
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colour
with a calming effect. I do not decorate my
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bedroom
with
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many
ornaments, since I follow minimalism. Inside my
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bedroom
, there is
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small
study desk, a bookshelf, a wardrobe and a bed.
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, not
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airy thanks to the presence of four windows, on which four pots of
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different
plants
are placed
.

Whenever I need to relieve
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bad
moods or contemplate something, I
usually
lock the door and sit
still
in my
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bedroom
. The pink
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colour
of the room always calms me down when I enter and the cool breeze blowing from the windows
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makes
me feel refreshed.
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IELTS essay Write a descriptive essay of about 200 words about the perfect place to relax.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
206 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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