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Write a descriptive essay about a shopping centre/mall that you have visited or that you know about.

Write a descriptive essay about a shopping centre/mall that you have visited or that you know about. 6poA3
I have visited some shopping malls in my hometown as well as Hanoi, but the one which appealed me most is a shopping centre called Aeon mall. The first time I went to the Aeon Mall was two years ago when I have just gone to university for a few months. Two of my new friends invited me to accompany them to there. That shopping centre is located near my university in Hanoi, therefore we got there by motorbikes. When we first looked around there, I was really overwhelmed with the luxury of that shopping mall that I have never seen before. There is a big parking lot with many vehicles.
I have visited
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shopping
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malls
in my hometown
as well
as Hanoi,
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but
the one which appealed me most is a
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shopping
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centre
called
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Aeon
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mall
. The
first
time I went to the
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Aeon
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Mall
was two years ago when I have
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just
gone to university for a few months. Two of my new friends invited me to accompany them to there. That
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shopping
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centre
is located
near my university in Hanoi,
therefore
we
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got
there by motorbikes. When we
first
looked around there, I was
really
overwhelmed with the luxury of that
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shopping
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mall
that I have never
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seen
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before
. There is a
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parking lot with
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vehicles.

IELTS essay Write a descriptive essay about a shopping centre/mall that you have visited or that you know about.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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