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World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Unlike in ancient times, there are a number of women are coming to the top of the ladders. Numerous people argue that men's leadership is frequently involving war and battle while women's leadership is rather peaceful. I completely disagree with the view and this essay will subject that gender is not the scale of measuring the quality of peace. Firstly, it is entirely false to claim that women can present a peaceful reign in comparison with men. This is due to the fact that there are numerous cases of women's leadership had led to conflict and war in the world. Most of the time, the reason for the conflicts and usurp were political rather than gender. For example, the leadership of Indira Gandhi in India had been a time of war and conflict. Therefore, we can not assume, women's leadership can bring any betterment in the governance. Furthermore, the wars in history have not resulted from the leadership. The reason is that when history is studied, it is obvious that most of the battles and even words wars were happened mainly due to political, economic, and sociological reasons. For instance, our word has gone through the two world war merely because of the wealth nation were trying to colonize poor countries. In this sence, it is undoublful that most of the historic war were emerged from the people are inspired policital reason.
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argue that
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and battle while women's
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leadership
is
rather
peaceful. I completely disagree with the view and this essay will subject that gender is not the scale of measuring the quality of peace.

Firstly
, it is
entirely
false to claim that women can present a peaceful reign
in comparison
with
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men
.
This is due to the fact that
there are numerous cases of women's
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leadership
had led to conflict and
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war
in the world. Most of the time, the
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reason
for the conflicts and usurp were political
rather
than gender.
For example
, the
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leadership
of Indira Gandhi in India had been a time of
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war
and conflict.
Therefore
, we can not assume, women's
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leadership
can bring any betterment in the governance.

Furthermore
, the
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wars
in history have not resulted from the
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leadership
. The
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reason
is that when history
is studied
, it is obvious that most of the battles and even words
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wars
were happened
mainly
due to political, economic, and sociological
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reasons
.
For instance
, our word has gone through the two world
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war
merely
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because
of the wealth nation were trying to colonize poor countries. In this
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sence
, it is
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undoublful
that most of the historic
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were emerged
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people
are inspired
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policital
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reason
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IELTS essay World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.

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