Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Working for big companies

Working for big companies rYkJo
There are advantages and drawbacks in both of the cases, working for a big company or to a small one. From my perspective and considering my personal experience I believe that is better to work for big companies. First, normally they are more organized than small businesses. Second, they have a career program thus it is easy to achieve a better job position and finally they have better salaries than small companies. To conclude, for the reasons presented above the benefits of working in a big company are more valuables than to work in a small business and outweigh any drawback.
There are advantages and drawbacks in both of the cases, working for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
or to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
one. From my perspective and considering my personal experience I believe
that is
better to work for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
.
First
,
normally
they are more organized than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
businesses. Second, they have a career program
thus
it is easy to achieve a better job position and
finally
they have better salaries than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
.
To conclude
, for the reasons presented above the benefits of working in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
are more valuables than to work in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
business and outweigh any drawback.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad
Show Comments
If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS essay Working for big companies

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts