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The internet helps us to stay connected

The internet helps us to stay connected VQ0NJ
Most of the peoples are using for internet to daily work. the example learning, working, and conective the people through online, searching new things from internet. that corona period all of world everything did the online. Lot of office work did the work from home concept. education sector hold are down that disaster. But it recover on using the Internet facility. Lot of buissnes in the world doing through the internet. And some doctor consulting on the internet.
Most of the peoples are using for internet to daily work.
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example learning, working, and
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through online, searching new things from internet.
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that
corona period all of world everything did the online. Lot of office work did the work from home concept.
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education
sector hold are down that disaster.
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But
it
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recover
on using the Internet facility. Lot of
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buissnes
in the world doing through the internet. And
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doctor consulting on the internet.

IELTS essay The internet helps us to stay connected

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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