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Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem. However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society.

Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem. However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society. GlWeL
For a long time, it is well known that third world countries have dominated the illiteracy problem. In contrast, in this new age it is more evident and increasing in the advance countries. This essay will examine the two main causes and effect to this problem. Firstly, the advent of television, because adolescent today no longer have to read to obtain information and for them watching television is much easier than reading. For instance today's minors gets home from school and go straight to "the box" to watch their favorite program such as to name the few netflix, HBO, fox etc. Second, there are too many working mothers, with that children are mostly left alone at home and unsupervised. As a result, parental support diminishes due to work related stress when at home. The main consequence to this problem is unemployment. if it may come as a surprise, but the huge problem lies now in the western countries where jobless are on the rise. According to literacy foundation organization, the unemployment rate of western countries is 2-4 times higher among those with little schooling than among those with bachelors degree. To conclude, illiteracy has been steadily rising on the western countries as evident of high unemployment and declining children parental guidance among its populace.
For a long time, it is well known that third world
countries
have dominated the illiteracy problem.
In contrast
, in this new age it is more evident and increasing in the advance
countries
. This essay will examine the two main causes and effect to this problem.

Firstly
, the advent of television,
because
adolescent
today
no longer
have to
read to obtain information and for them watching television is much easier than reading.
For instance
today
's minors
gets
home from school and go straight to
"
the box
"
to
watch
their favorite program such as to name the few
netflix
, HBO, fox etc. Second, there are too
many
working mothers, with that children are
mostly
left
alone at home and unsupervised.
As a result
, parental support diminishes due to work related
stress
when at home.

The main
consequence to
this problem is unemployment.
if
it may
come
as a surprise,
but
the huge problem lies
now
in the western
countries
where jobless are on the rise. According to literacy foundation organization, the unemployment rate of western
countries
is 2-4 times higher among those with
little
schooling than among those with bachelors degree.

To conclude
, illiteracy has been
steadily
rising on the western
countries
as evident of high unemployment and declining children parental guidance among its populace.
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IELTS essay Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem. However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society.

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