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Working at head office in another country

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I am really obsessed with the work and working environment at this office. As I am a senior marketing advisor with 12 years of vast experience, now I would like to expand my possibilities into marketing and purchasing department. So I expose my interest to work at the company‘s head office for half a year. Till the time I am not available at my desk, my colleague will be handling all the ongoing projects, with all the sincerity and enthusiasm So, as far as I know about your position in our company, holds most reputed and valuable position. Only you can help me on the situation. I would appreciate for your time in arrangements for my overseas transfer
I am
really
obsessed with the work and working environment at this office. As I am a senior marketing advisor with 12 years of vast experience,
now
I would like to expand my possibilities into marketing and purchasing department.
So
I expose my interest to work at the
company
‘s head office for half a year.

Till the time I am not available at my desk, my colleague will be handling all the ongoing projects, with all the sincerity and enthusiasm

So
, as far as I know about your position in our
company
, holds most reputed and valuable position.
Only
you can
help
me on the situation. I would appreciate for your time in arrangements for my overseas
transfer
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IELTS essay Working at head office in another country

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
117 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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