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Work is the most important element in life and in relation to this, it is said and believed by many that life without a satisfying job is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Money is the most important need of a human being. A person work very hard to earn it. Many people think believe that without a comfortable job, life has no meaning. I do agree that a human should be satisfied with his job. To explain this, views are mentioned in the underlying paragraph. To begin with, for a good lifestyle one needs a good earning. People work to earn so as to live their life to fullest. So it is mandatory that both workplace and culture of the office is healthy. Satisfaction comes from within. If an individual is not happy with what he is doing, he will not be able to give his hundred percent towars his job. There are many factors which decides this which includes income, people, workload, politics in workplace etcetra. Such things demotivates an employer. If a human being is not encouraged and appreciated for his work, it affects them psychologically. Moreover, encouraging people from time to timw help them grow with time. Not only this, their relations with there family also strengthen. Some humans get mentally affected if they are not satisfied with their job. Stress and anxiety are commonly observed in such kind of persons. To conclude, it is very important to have a healthy living both at home and at place you work.
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work
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very
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hard
to earn it.
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people
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think
believe that without a comfortable
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job
, life has no meaning. I do
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human
should
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with his
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job
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this, views
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To
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with, for a
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good
lifestyle one needs a
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earning.
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People
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work
to earn
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so as to
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live
their life to fullest.
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it is mandatory that both workplace and culture of the office is healthy. Satisfaction
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comes
from within. If an individual is not happy with what he is doing, he will not be able to give his hundred percent
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towars
his
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job
. There are
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factors which decides this which includes income,
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people
, workload, politics in workplace
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etcetra
. Such things demotivates an employer. If a
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human
being is not encouraged and appreciated for his
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work
, it affects them
psychologically
.

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, encouraging
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people
from time to
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timw
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help
them grow with time. Not
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this, their relations with there family
also
strengthen.
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Some
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humans
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get
mentally
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affected
if they are not satisfied with their
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job
.
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Stress
and anxiety are
commonly
observed in such kind of persons.

To conclude
, it is
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very
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important
to have a healthy living both at home and at place you
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IELTS essay Work is the most important element in life and in relation to this, it is said and believed by many that life without a satisfying job is meaningless.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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