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With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see th is as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see th is as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? MR5L
Learning books through electronic devices has become increasingly popular nowadays. People considered e-books when they prefer reading e-books; however, sometimes it puts strain on reader eyes. In my view, Using e-books is more convenient than paper booksTo begin with, The greatest benefit of e-books is that they do not have to buy book to read. Then, it helps them to save certain amount that they need to buy book. It is because
Learning books through electronic devices has become
increasingly
popular nowadays.
People
considered e-books when they prefer reading e-books;
however
,
sometimes
it puts strain on reader eyes. In my view, Using e-books is more convenient than paper
booksTo
begin
with, The greatest benefit of e-books is that they do not
have to
buy
book to read. Then, it
helps
them to save certain amount that they need to
buy
book. It is
because
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IELTS essay With the rise in e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see th is as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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71 words
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