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Why voting is neccessary ?

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The election is also a festival of the nation so that every citizen must give votes. This essay illustrates the ways to motivate people for voting and the reasons that why an election is necessary. On the one side, there are so many ways to aware people of their voting rights. The first way to motivate people is an effective speech by a well-known personality whom people can easily trust. Youth is mainly responsible for voting so that volunteers can arrange the webinars and seminars at universities. For example, recently senior students of MS University, Baroda perform a drama to aware students vote. Secondly, leaders can visit voter's homes and provide authentic information about the advantages and disadvantages of voting. Going to the next point, if the government decleare public holidays on election day then employed citizens could also do voting. On the other side, election is essential for nation because future of the region will be decided by votings. If public choose perfact leader for themselves then it would beneficial for nations. For instance, representative of Newzealand, she work in positive manner in pandemic situation and because of her hard work and intelligence, Newzealand became first Covid free nation so that voting should be mandatory for every citizen. In conclusion, voting is right and duty of every citizen of nation.
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election
is
also
a festival of the
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nation
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so
that every citizen
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must
give votes. This essay illustrates the ways to motivate
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people
for
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voting
and the reasons that why an
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election
is necessary.

On the one side, there are
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so
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many
ways to aware
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people
of their
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voting
rights. The
first
way to motivate
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people
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is
an effective speech by a well-known personality whom
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people
can
easily
trust. Youth is
mainly
responsible for
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voting
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so
that volunteers can arrange the webinars and seminars at universities.
For example
, recently senior students of MS University, Baroda
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perform
a drama to aware students vote.
Secondly
, leaders can visit voter's homes and provide authentic information about the advantages and disadvantages of
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voting
. Going to the
next
point, if the
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government
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decleare
public holidays on
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election
day then employed citizens could
also
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do voting
.

On the other side,
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election
is essential for
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nation
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because
future of the region will
be decided
by
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votings
. If public choose
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perfact
leader for themselves then it
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would beneficial
for
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nations
.
For instance
, representative of
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Newzealand
, she work in
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positive
manner in pandemic situation and
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because
of her
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hard
work and intelligence,
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Newzealand
became
first
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Covid
free
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nation
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so
that
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voting
should be mandatory for every citizen.

In conclusion
,
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voting
is right and duty of every citizen of
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nation
.
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IELTS essay Why voting is neccessary ?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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