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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

I completely disagree with this statement. Demand for coatings and gas are increasing nowadays. There are still areas where the supplies are yet to be discovered. Giving access to those resources will deteriorate the remaining resources and there will not be anything left for our future generation. It will produce a conflict between the countries who are trying to use them. Firstly, grease and gas are nonrenewable resources. If we exploit those resources which are yet to be discovered for our own use there won’t be any resources left for our future generation. In the current scenario usage of grease and gas are increasing and as years pass the demand will also increase. Therefore we should not allow anyone to un-wrap the left resources. They should be preserved and inherited to our future generation. In some countries like India there are no resources left to give them to their lineage. This situation aroused because the country didn’t use their resources wisely. Secondly, by giving the map for undiscovered resources it will raise conflicts between countries who are trying to claim them for their own demand. There are still places in this universe which are hidden from the modern world. Those places would have a lot of undiscovered resources, by discovering them, we may lead to encroachment of those areas and it will automatically disturb the natural habitat of those places. There will also be a quarrel between the super powers of the world in finding those places. This quarrel may also increase the possibility of a war. A precise example of these are the issues which are happening in countries like Iran and Iraq. To conclude, it's sometimes good not disclose some places of the world, we might save them and their resources from the hands of the people who are trying to waste them. Those grease and gas should be rightfully given to our children and grandchildren for their utilization.

I completely disagree with this statement. Demand for coatings and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 are increasing nowadays. There are still
 areas where the supplies are yet
 to be discovered
. Giving access to those resources will deteriorate the remaining resources and there will not be anything This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for our future generation. It will produce a conflict between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 who are trying to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 them.

Firstly
, grease and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 are nonrenewable resources. If we exploit those resources which are yet
 to be discovered
 for our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 there won’t be any resources This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for our future generation. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 scenario usage of grease and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 are increasing and as years pass the demand will also
 increase. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 we should not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 anyone to Possible spelling mistake found.unwrap
un-wrap
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 resources. They should be preserved
 and inherited to our future generation. In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 like India there are no resources This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to give them to their lineage. This situation aroused This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 didn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 their resources wisely
.

Secondly
, by giving the map for undiscovered resources it will raise conflicts between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 who are trying to claim them for their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 demand. There are still
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 in this universe which are hidden
 from the modern world. Those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 would have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 undiscovered resources, by discovering them, we may lead to encroachment of those areas and it will automatically
 disturb the natural habitat of those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
. There will also
 be a quarrel between the super powers of the world in finding those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
. This quarrel may also
 increase the possibility of a war. A precise example of these are the issues which are happening in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 like Iran and Iraq.

To conclude
, it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 not disclose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 of the world, we might save them and their resources from the hands of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are trying to waste them. Those grease and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 should be rightfully
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to our children and grandchildren for their utilization. 