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With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?

With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important do you think is letter-writing? k90d
i agree with that due to increase use of mobile phones and computers, one of the sublime tradition and means of communication no longer recognized in this technology world. the letter writing skills become extinct from this modern world. these skills describe as old fashioned. I personally beleive that the advancement of technology is good for this modern world by this the distance of kilometers become few seconds. we can communicate with our loved ones as soon as possible which are not possible with letter writing. this advancement in communication industry is good for individual level as well as nation well. by this electronic communications means nations development increases and they progress economically as well as socially. As opinion of other people may be i am wrong because many people dont satisfied with this fastest world and they want to follow their old traditions. the latter writing skills is one of tradition of old times. And in schools letter writing is must in papers. they also said that you cant feel the emotions of others, who want to communicate in emails, using phones and when you write for someone in your own language they feel the emotions of writers. well i dont know how they would proceed. Actually new generations have to remember these traditions of ancestors as we also wants our children to follow or atleast know our traditions. letter writing is important as sometimes we have to communicate in our trade industry withthese types of formal writing skills and as i say traditions are meant to remember. In conclusion of all above discussion advancement in every field should be accepted as it is requirement of developing countries but we should not forget our traditions which are the basics as it became obsolete.
i
agree
with that due to increase
use
of mobile phones and computers, one of the sublime
tradition
and means of communication no longer recognized in this technology
world
.
the
letter
writing
skills
become extinct from this modern
world
.
these
skills
describe
as
old fashioned
.

I
personally
beleive
that the advancement of technology is
good
for this modern
world
by this the distance of kilometers become few seconds.
we
can communicate with our
loved
ones as
soon
as possible which are not possible with
letter
writing
.
this
advancement in communication industry is
good
for individual level as
well
as nation
well
.
by
this electronic communications means nations development
increases and
they progress
economically
as
well
as
socially
.

As opinion of other
people
may be
i
am
wrong
because
many
people
dont
satisfied with this fastest
world and
they want to follow their
old
traditions
.
the
latter
writing
skills
is one of
tradition
of
old
times. And in schools
letter
writing
is
must
in papers.
they
also
said that you
cant
feel the emotions of others, who want to communicate in emails, using phones and when you write for someone in your
own
language they feel the emotions of writers.
well
i
dont
know how they would proceed.

Actually new generations
have to
remember these
traditions
of ancestors as we
also
wants
our children to follow or
atleast
know our
traditions
.
letter
writing
is
important
as
sometimes
we
have to
communicate in our trade industry
withthese
types of formal
writing
skills
and as
i
say
traditions
are meant
to remember.

In conclusion
of all above discussion advancement in every field should be
accepted
as it is requirement of
developing countries
but
we should not forget our
traditions
which are the basics as it became obsolete.
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IELTS essay With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important do you think is letter-writing?

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