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With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas.Is it a positive or negative development

With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development pNGL
A generation ago individuals used to inhabit in an open space territories. In today's world, as density of people is increasing, they opt for accommodation with little or no outdoor areas. I believe, economy of spot, leads to a favorable outcomes. This essay will discuss both negative and positive evolution, as well as support my point of view. On the first aspect of matter, privacy plays a significant role in humans every day lifes, consequently lack of a living place affects person's mental health. For instance, family with decent amount of members in it, tend to suffer from depression and anxiety more than those, who have less than 4 members. However, this argument is vital and wasn't proven nor statistically, nor scientifically. On the remained aspect of matter, I would like to advocate that, there are some reasons why some individuals chose to live in smaller houses. Crucial one is an expansion of fertility worldwide. In order to save an acre for a future generation, homo sapiens priorities others instead of themselves. Thus, our children and grandchildren will pursue better advances in our honor. Undoubtedly, I see more benefits than drawbacks. To sum everything up, it has not been clearly recorded whether small outdoor areas has a negative impact on development of humans, while generosity of people let our future develop further.
A generation ago individuals
used
to inhabit in an open space
territories
. In
today
's world, as density of
people
is increasing, they opt for accommodation with
little
or no outdoor areas. I believe, economy of spot, leads to a favorable
outcomes
. This essay will discuss both
negative
and
positive
evolution,
as well
as support my point of view. On the
first
aspect of matter, privacy plays a significant role in humans every day
lifes
,
consequently
lack of a living place affects person's mental health.
For instance
, family with decent amount of members in it, tend to suffer from depression and anxiety more than those, who have less than 4 members.
However
, this argument is vital and wasn't proven nor
statistically
, nor
scientifically
. On the remained aspect of matter, I would like to advocate that, there are
some
reasons why
some
individuals chose to
live
in smaller
houses
. Crucial one is an expansion of fertility worldwide. In order to save an acre for a future generation, homo sapiens priorities others
instead
of themselves.
Thus
, our children and grandchildren will pursue better advances in our honor.
Undoubtedly
, I
see
more benefits than drawbacks. To sum everything up, it has not been
clearly
recorded whether
small
outdoor areas has a
negative
impact on development of humans, while generosity of
people
let
our future develop
further
.
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IELTS essay With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development

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