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there is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather tahn large faily

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FAMILY PLAY A INDISPENSABLE ROLE IN EVERY INDIVIDUAL LIFE. WITH THE ASSIST of clan people success in their life. however, there is an rising explore all over the globe to have a nuclear family rather than a joint family. I will discuuto begin with, family is a backbone of everyone life. first and foremost, in a nuclear family individual have a privacy because no another in the family while, in a single clan no disturbance in the house. everyone busy in their own work. secondly, in a nuclear group parents concentrate on child in a proper way due to this people do not feel sole and they spend their time together in a well way and share feeling and thoughts with the caretakers without any hesitation. whereas, less work in a small clan individual do their work easily in a proper manner. on the other hand, living in nuclear family have more cons. at the first place, ina single amily
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FAMILY
PLAY A INDISPENSABLE ROLE IN EVERY INDIVIDUAL LIFE. WITH THE ASSIST of clan
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people
success in their life.
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however
, there is
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an
rising explore all over the globe to have a nuclear
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family
rather
than a joint
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family
. I will
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discuuto
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begin
with,
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family
is a backbone of everyone life.
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first
and foremost, in a nuclear
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family
individual have a privacy
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because
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no
another in the
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family
while, in a single clan no disturbance in the
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house
.
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everyone
busy in their
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secondly
, in a nuclear group parents concentrate on child
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in a proper way
due to this
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people
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sole and
they spend their time together in a well way and share feeling and thoughts with the caretakers without any hesitation.
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whereas
, less work in a
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small
clan individual do their work
easily
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in a proper manner
.
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on
the other hand, living in nuclear
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family
have more cons.
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at
the
first
place,
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ina
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IELTS essay there is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather tahn large faily

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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