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there is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather tahn large faily Wp3N

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You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
FAMILY
 PLAY A INDISPENSABLE ROLE IN EVERY INDIVIDUAL LIFE. WITH THE ASSIST of clan This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 success in their life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, there is Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 rising explore all over the globe to have a nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
rather
 than a joint You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. I will Possible spelling mistake found.discussdisputediscretediscodiscountdisrupt
discuuto
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 is a backbone of everyone life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirst
first
 and foremost, in a nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 individual have a privacy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 another in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 while, in a single clan no disturbance in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEveryone
everyone
 busy in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSecondly
secondly
, in a nuclear group parents concentrate on child Consider replacing "in a proper way" with the adverb for "proper"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a proper way
 due to this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do not feel Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).sole, and
sole and
 they spend their time together in a well way and share feeling and thoughts with the caretakers without any hesitation. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhereas
whereas
, less work in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 clan individual do their work easily
Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with the adverb for "proper"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a proper manner
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other hand, living in nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 have more cons. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAt
at
 the first
 place, Possible spelling mistake found.InaINAinIRARNAink
ina
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