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With development of the modern transportation comes environmental problems. What is your opinion

With development of the modern transportation comes environmental problems. What is your opinion GPLm
The plethora of people believe that ecological problems comes with modern transportation system. in my opinion modern transportation system also give us large benefits. First of all, there are number of latest transportation facilities are there for to enhance our travel. for example there are electric buses by which we can travel along at less charges. specifically modern transportation causes more charges than expected and also there are many community who build modern transportation in very less amount. Secondly, it is highly visible that there are some advantages of unique transportation system. the standard of transportation in low charges are average while comparing with the costly developed transportation system. Modern facilities definitely provide us a large amount of technologies we can enhance by using.
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modern
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facilities are there for to enhance our travel.
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specifically
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advantages of unique
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.
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the
standard of
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transportation
in low charges are average while comparing with the costly developed
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transportation
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system
.
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Modern
facilities definitely provide us a large amount of technologies we can enhance by using.
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IELTS essay With development of the modern transportation comes environmental problems. What is your opinion

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