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With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. KMq0
Today, the growth of population contributes people to communicate using modern technologies, thus creating a threat for personal and intimate interactions to be vanished. I agree with this statement to a certain extent, as not all the words and feelings can be shared virtually. It is obvious, that latest achievements in communicating sphere are deeply incorporated in society’s daily routine and undoubtedly one cannot imagine a day of his or her life without using gadgets or applications. Moreover, the influence of modern technology is as significant, that most companies run their day to businesses based on the internet and relevant software. As a result, people nowadays meet each other not as often as they used to do few decades earlier. Bright example of disappearing of face to face communication is the variety of latest online platforms for holding conferences, business meetings or chatting with friends and relatives. The most famous of which are Skype, Viber, Whatsapp or Zoom. So are people about to lose their natural skills of communicating? Despite the frightening tendency we face today, I am sure, that there are values that cannot be transferred into virtual field, and yes, I do believe that little by little some layers of society are realizing the significance of face to face interaction. Additionally, some occasions like birthday parties, weddings and datings between the couples or a simple hugging of beloved ones cannot be replaced with anything and go to online mode. For instance, no matter how far technologies are gone, one can never feel the warmth of his or her parents or a child, unless they are next to each other. As a conclusion, in spite of today’s digitalization processes worldwide, where people spend less time together live, I hope it will not be able to take over the simple unique human features, such as gathering together with friends, relatives, holding beloved one’s hand and kissing goodnight the child.
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, the growth of population contributes
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to communicate using modern technologies,
thus
creating a threat for personal and intimate interactions to
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. I
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agree
with this statement to a certain extent, as not all the words and feelings can
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virtually
.

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deeply
incorporated in society’s daily routine and
undoubtedly
one cannot imagine a day of
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his or her
life without using gadgets or applications.
Moreover
, the influence of modern technology is as significant, that most
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companies
run their day to businesses based on the internet and relevant software.
As a result
,
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people
nowadays
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meet
each other not as
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often
as they
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used
to do few decades earlier. Bright example of disappearing of
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face
to
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face
communication is the variety of
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latest
online platforms for holding conferences, business meetings or chatting with friends and relatives. The most
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famous
of which are Skype,
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Viber
,
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Whatsapp
or Zoom.

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are
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people
about to lose their natural
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of communicating? Despite the frightening tendency we
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face
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today
, I am sure, that there are values that cannot
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into virtual field, and yes, I do believe that
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little
by
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layers of society
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are realizing
the significance of
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face
to
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interaction.
Additionally
,
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some
occasions like birthday parties, weddings and
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datings
between the couples or a simple hugging of beloved
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ones
cannot
be replaced
with anything and go to online mode.
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, no matter how far technologies
are gone
, one can never feel the warmth of
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his or her
parents or a child, unless they are
next
to each other.

As a conclusion,
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in spite of
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today
’s digitalization processes worldwide, where
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people
spend less time together
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live
, I hope it will not be able to take over the simple unique human features, such as gathering together with friends, relatives, holding beloved one’s hand and kissing goodnight the child.
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IELTS essay With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.

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319 words
6.0
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