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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. mADN
Nowadays animals play the role of a human’s friend. So, argument that animals ought to have rights is both supported and refuted by many. This essay will examine both sides of the issue. It is certainly true that animals can have the same rights as people have. Biologically they are the same live beings as humans, who also have got their interests. According to P. Singer’s theory, both humans and non-human beings have got the same interests to be free from the fear and stress. For example, a mouse and a man does not want to get a harm from the stone or a car on the road. Therefore, the modern society pays a great attention on animals’ welfare enforcing new legal regulations and principles in the field of treatment with them. Meanwhile, people ought to use animals for their aims and goals. Numerous populations eat meat and animals’ products are the most significant sources of life. By the way, animals may help us in various research and studies which could be beneficial for the future. To illustrate this issue, the practice of testing of medical drugs on rats may be mentioned. Thus, the sustainable development is impossible to reach without usage of animals in everyday life. In summary, both sides of the argument regarding that animals should have rights, have strong support. However, after analyzing both camps, I believe that animals should be granted by several natural rights. As such, it is predicted that the issue of animal welfare will be improved.
Nowadays
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animals
play the role of a human’s friend.
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So
, argument that
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animals
ought to have
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rights
is both supported and refuted by
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many
. This essay will examine both sides of the issue.

It is
certainly
true that
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animals
can have the same
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rights
as
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people
have.
Biologically
they are the same
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live
beings as humans, who
also
have
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got
their interests. According to P. Singer’s theory, both humans and non-human beings have
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got
the same interests to be free from the fear and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
.
For example
, a mouse and a
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man
does not want to
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get
a harm from the stone or a car on the road.
Therefore
, the modern society pays a great attention on
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animals’
welfare enforcing new legal regulations and principles in the field of treatment with them.

Meanwhile,
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people
ought to
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use
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animals
for their aims and goals. Numerous populations eat meat and
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animals’
products are the most significant sources of life. By the way,
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animals
may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us in various research and studies which could be beneficial for the future. To illustrate this issue, the practice of testing of medical drugs on rats may
be mentioned
.
Thus
, the sustainable development is impossible to reach without usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
in everyday life.

In summary, both sides of the argument regarding that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
should have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rights
, have strong support.
However
, after analyzing both camps, I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
should
be granted
by several natural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rights
. As such, it
is predicted
that the issue of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
welfare will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
.
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IELTS essay A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

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4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
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