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With advances in communication technology, more and more people are able to work from home. This increase of homeworking has been of real benefit to workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With advances in communication technology, more and more people are able to work from home. This increase of homeworking has been of real benefit to workers. with this opinion? Pg5yd
Thanks to the development of technology, people are communicating through their computers or other devices. Growing technological can be seen in working, thus bring benefits in working from home. Despite this, I believed it also has some drawbacks, which analyzed the inability of working from home to both the lack of communication and the bill burden. One of the main benefits of working from home is how this working style affects the infection’s speed of coronavirus in society. Since covid 19 pandemic sweeping across the globe, keeping a distance is the key to prevent contagiously of the virus; however, it may seem impossible to keep a distance in working place or in school. To reiterate, teleworking can be seen as an effective social distancing measure, which is potential for health benefits associated with the COVID-19 pandemic. On the other hand, working at home may decrease face-to-face interaction and cooperation between members. Furthermore, direct interaction allows stronger connections, better non-verbal understanding, and more team participation, but this is not the case for teleworking. If lacking communication and collaboration had risen, workers would have to bear with depression and anxiety. Moreover, home working diminishes productivity or the team’s performance. Let workers in American be an illustration, there was a decrease in productivity of about 20% on average. Another drawback is how teleworking increases home payment. Because of the coronavirus, people are spending more time at home to work, which the bills for electricity, water, renting, … may increase while salary remains or even decreases because of the pandemic. If dealing with home payment was ignored by the government, people who are working at home, especially the poor would experience burdensome living. Because of this, those burdens may result in stress, anxiety, and depression. In conclusion, despite the health benefit, I argue that the drawbacks of working from home in both communication and taxes.
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people
are communicating through their computers or other devices. Growing technological can be
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seen
in
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bring
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working
from home. Despite this, I believed it
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has
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drawbacks, which analyzed the inability of
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from home to both the lack of communication and the bill burden.

One of the main
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benefits
of
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working
from home is how this
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working
style affects the infection’s speed of coronavirus in society. Since
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covid 19
pandemic sweeping across the globe, keeping a distance is the key to
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prevent
contagiously
of the virus;
however
, it may seem impossible to
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keep
a distance in
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working
place or in school. To reiterate, teleworking can be
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seen
as an effective social distancing measure, which is potential for health
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benefits
associated with the COVID-19 pandemic.

On the other hand
,
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working
at home may decrease face-to-face interaction and cooperation between members.
Furthermore
, direct interaction
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allows
stronger connections, better non-verbal understanding, and more team participation,
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this is not the case for teleworking. If lacking communication and collaboration had risen, workers would
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have to
bear with depression and anxiety.
Moreover
, home
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working
diminishes productivity or the team’s performance.
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Let
workers in American be an illustration, there was a decrease in productivity of about 20% on average.

Another drawback is how teleworking increases home payment.
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Because
of the coronavirus,
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people
are spending more time at home to work, which the bills for electricity, water, renting, … may increase while salary remains or even decreases
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because
of the pandemic. If dealing with home payment was
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ignored
by the
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government
,
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people
who are
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working
at home,
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the poor would experience burdensome living.
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, those burdens may result in
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stress
, anxiety, and depression.

In conclusion
, despite the health
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benefit
, I argue that the drawbacks of
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working
from home in both communication and taxes.
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IELTS essay With advances in communication technology, more and more people are able to work from home. This increase of homeworking has been of real benefit to workers. with this opinion?

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