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With a growing world population one of the pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With a growing world population one of the pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. oo9q
Nowadays the world population is growing rapidly and it is increasingly more problematic to ensure that everyone has sufficient food to live. Consequently, some argue that genetically modified food could be helpful in solving this issue. In my opinion, GM foods may represent a great opportunity to feed the masses and overcome the problem of world famine. In recent times the world has become extremely highly populated and this ongoing trend creates some issues, one of the most impellent is being able to provide food to a constantly growing world population because natural resources are limited. Some believe that genetically modified foods can help us solve this problem. In fact, by using GM foods it is possible to create more resistant crops that cannot get so easily destroyed by insects or by a climatic disaster. This would have a tremendous positive impact on agriculture and on the food industry. Furthermore, in order to overcome the famine problem, many GM foods could be created in laboratories in large quantities, thus it could be possible to prepare extensive quantity of aliments to feed all the people across the globe. In my view, the opportunity offered by genetically modified foods is undoubtedely extraordinary. As a matter of fact, genetically modified agricultural products are stronger and they do not get so easily affected by adverse weather or by the attack of animals. In addition, I am convinced that the producing GM foods in laboratories can increase the amount of food available and therefore it is also possible to feed the growing masses and fight the world hunger. In conclusion, in our modern times GM products can become a useful and viable solution to rapidly create resistant and nutritious aliments to nourish the world population. From my point of view, I welcome this innovative type of food and I hope it will become soon more available for everyone.
Nowadays the
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world
population is growing
rapidly
and it is
increasingly
more problematic to ensure that everyone has sufficient
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food
to
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live
.
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,
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some
argue that
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genetically
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modified
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food
could be helpful in solving this issue. In my opinion, GM
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foods
may represent a great opportunity to feed the masses and overcome the problem of
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world
famine.

In recent times the
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world
has become
extremely
highly
populated and this ongoing trend creates
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some
issues, one of the most
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impellent
is being able to provide
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food
to a
constantly
growing
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world
population
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because
natural resources
are limited
.
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Some
believe that
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genetically
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modified
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foods
can
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help
us solve this problem. In fact, by using GM
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foods
it is possible to create more resistant crops that cannot
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get
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so
easily
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destroyed
by insects or by a climatic disaster. This would have a tremendous
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positive
impact on agriculture and on the
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food
industry.

Furthermore
, in order to overcome the famine problem,
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many
GM
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foods
could
be created
in laboratories in large quantities,
thus
it could be possible to prepare extensive quantity of aliments to feed all the
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people
across the globe.

In my view, the opportunity offered by
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genetically
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modified
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foods
is
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undoubtedely
extraordinary. As a matter of fact,
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genetically
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modified
agricultural products are
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stronger and
they do not
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get
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so
easily
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affected
by adverse weather or by the attack of animals.
In addition
, I
am convinced
that the producing GM
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foods
in laboratories can increase the amount of
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food
available and
therefore
it is
also
possible to feed the growing masses and fight the
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world
hunger.

In conclusion
, in our modern times GM products can become a useful and viable solution to
rapidly
create resistant and nutritious aliments to nourish the
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world
population. From my point of view, I welcome this innovative type of
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food
and I hope it will become
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soon
more available for everyone.
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IELTS essay With a growing world population one of the pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem.

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