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Winner way to be winners in this life

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There are many ways to improve yourself, but the really issue is to stop trying after falling. In my life I fall in my life but also I think that I would like to stop then I remember that I should complete what I start with its possible for anyone to listen to this but when you try to work with it will be interacted for you to finish your goals or your hard dreams with it. I would like to give examples for this first I will ask you about any successful person you may know lets talk about any of them do you think they success by the first try? Or is he use only his first route to do this. For possible it will be no! of course in light of the fact that in our life there're laws that control us and I think one of these law is what I call the success law what is says that for win you should do. I wish that everyone is a success icon on the contrary it will not be believable without working on it.
There are
many
ways to
improve
yourself,
but
the
really
issue is to
stop
trying after falling. In my life I fall in my life
but
also
I
think
that I would like to
stop
then I remember that I should complete what I
start
with its possible for anyone to listen to this
but
when you try to work with it will
be interacted
for you to finish your goals or your
hard
dreams with it.

I would like to give examples for this
first
I will ask you about any successful person you may know
lets
talk about any of them do you
think
they success
by the
first
try? Or is he
use
only
his
first
route to do this. For
possible it
will be no!
of
course in light of the fact that in our life there're laws that control us and I
think
one of these law is what I call the success law what is says that for win you should do.

I wish that everyone is a success icon
on the contrary
it will not be believable without working on it.
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IELTS essay Winner way to be winners in this life

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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