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why you want to study again?

why you want to study again? EL0QB
Due to variety of Covid-19 causes, i have found that education is very crucial. For as long as we have highly educated, for great amount of knowledge. We could have opportunity to apply our CV to one of us dream jobs. Moreover, we could get well-paid job and work in a professional area. Nevertheless, we could help our family, relatives, and citizens through this hard time since our financial is stable. For instance, oxigen cylinders, alimentary products, medicines, ect. . . are needed at this moment.
Due to variety of Covid-19 causes,
i
have found that education is
very
crucial. For as long as we have
highly
educated, for great amount of knowledge. We could have opportunity to apply our CV to one of us dream jobs.
Moreover
, we could
get
well-paid job and work in a professional area.
Nevertheless
, we could
help
our family, relatives, and citizens through this
hard
time since our financial is stable.
For instance
,
oxigen
cylinders, alimentary products, medicines,
ect
.
.
.
are
needed at this moment.
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IELTS essay why you want to study again?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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