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Why you chose IELTS computer based examination?

Why you chose IELTS computer based examination? 70Br2
I need to IELTS exam for going abroad. I have decided, I will try computer-based in the IELTS examination. I chose this option because my typing speed or wonderful. When I write a paper based on examination my hand-writhing is very bad. If I will have good at computer-based examinations, I will more peoples suggestions on computer-based examinations. My target band score is 7+. If I got a 7+ score, my sister will gift me which is iPhone. I am really excited which is a very important gift for me. And I am really thankful for this decision. So I should IELTS examination got a 7+ score.
I need to IELTS exam for going abroad. I have decided, I will try computer-based in the IELTS
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I
chose this option
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my typing speed or wonderful.
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When
I write a paper based on
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examination
my hand-writhing is
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very
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bad
. If I
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will have
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good
at computer-based
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examinations
, I will more peoples suggestions on computer-based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
examinations
. My target band score is 7+. If I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a 7+ score, my sister will gift me which is iPhone. I am
really
excited which is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
gift for me. And I am
really
thankful for this decision.
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So
I should IELTS
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
examination
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a 7+ score.
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IELTS essay Why you chose IELTS computer based examination?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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