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Why to use ride sharing facility like Uber and Lyft?

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According to research of San Francisco, Technologies Inc. , 2009, it have been concluded that people use the ride sharing facility there are main four reason behind that as follow Firstly; fast trip and almost anywhere, many believes that ride sharing is the fastest to comes at pick up location and you can ride any places of the city or state without any inconvenience, Secondly; safety, Uber hires the drivers after their criminal background check because in previous years the drivers of the small taxi company attacks the passengers to robbed them so in this case the uber and lyft is the safest mode to travel, Lastly; Post party rides, after party in small town at late night it is very difficult to find the taxi but the uber and lyft has the millions of drivers all over the countries so it’s easier to find the ride sharing facility and it is good to maintain the law ( do not drink and drive).
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IELTS essay Why to use ride sharing facility like Uber and Lyft?

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