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Is it justified to use animals in scientific experiments Explain your answer basis your experience and knowledge and suggest alternatives if any

Is it justified to use animals in scientific experiments Explain your answer basis your experience and knowledge and suggest alternatives if any VBPK6
Progress in science has vastly improved the living standards of humans in the last couple of centuries. Progress in science rests on scientific discoveries which are not possible unless one is willing and able to test and sharpen the new theories and knowledge via practical experiments. These experiments, especially in the preliminary stages, are more risky for its subjects due to the majority of unknowns. In the field of medicine, the subjects in the initial stages of inquiry and experiments are often animals like rats and other mammals as they bear a close resemblance to human DNA structure and hence the findings from experiments conducted on these animals are more relevant to predict the impact on humans. Given these experiments essential but risky, the question is that should we subject these animals to the experiments, is it justified, are there any alternatives? In my opinion, although experiments on animals are not preferable but given the lack of alternative, they are essential, as the net outcome is positive as it leads to scientific progress and better living conditions for the greater population. Hence the stakeholders must walk a fine line to avoid abuse of animals and while preserving the pace of scientific progress. Hence we must take steps to minimize the negative effect of these experiments on animals and there are ways in which various parties like the scientific community, government bodies and NGOs can play a part. There are 2 broad ways of address this concern (1) by minimizing the number of experiments conducted to only the essential ones (2) by ensuring that we use all the available information and knowledge to minimize the risk of these experiments on well being of animals. Let's expand: 1) Minimize the number of experiments: - Meta database of experiments conducted till date and easy accessibility to facilitate collaboration within the scientific community and reduce duplication of experiments - Use of AI and similar technologies to create simulations to the extent possible to avoid experiments on animals. 2) Minimize the negative effect of experiments 1) Strong justification for the experiment 2) Best practice for conducting experiments 3) Minimize the unknowns prior to experiment to minimize the risk 4) Sound regulations and legislation to govern the experiments With these measures, we can minimize the adverse impact on animals without halting the engine of scientific discovery.
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the living standards of humans in the last couple of centuries. Progress in science rests on
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scientific
discoveries which are not possible unless one is willing and able to
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test
and sharpen the new theories and knowledge via practical
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experiments
. These
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,
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in the preliminary stages, are more risky for its subjects due to the majority of unknowns.

In the field of medicine, the subjects in the initial stages of inquiry and
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experiments
are
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often
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animals
like rats and other mammals as they bear a close resemblance to human DNA structure and
hence
the findings from
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experiments
conducted on these
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animals
are more relevant to predict the impact on humans.

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these
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experiments
essential
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risky, the question is that should we subject these
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animals
to the
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experiments
, is it justified, are there any alternatives?

In my opinion, although
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experiments
on
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animals
are not preferable
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but
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given
the lack of alternative, they are essential, as the net outcome is
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positive
as it leads to
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scientific
progress and better living conditions for the greater population.
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Hence
the stakeholders
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must
walk a fine line to avoid abuse of
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animals
and while preserving the pace of
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scientific
progress.

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we
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must
take steps to
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minimize
the
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negative
effect of these
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experiments
on
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animals
and there are ways in which various parties like the
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scientific
community,
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government
bodies and NGOs can play a part.

There are 2 broad ways of address this concern (1) by minimizing the number of
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experiments
conducted to
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only
the essential ones (2) by ensuring that we
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use
all the available information and knowledge to
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minimize
the
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risk
of these
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experiments
on
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well being
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animals
.
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1)
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Minimize
the number of experiments:

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Meta database of
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experiments
conducted till date and easy accessibility to facilitate collaboration within the
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scientific
community and
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reduce
duplication of experiments

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Use
of AI and similar technologies to create simulations to the extent possible to avoid
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experiments
on
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animals. 2)
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Minimize
the
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negative
effect of
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experiments 1)
Strong justification for the
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experiment 2)
Best practice for conducting
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experiments 3)
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Minimize
the unknowns prior to
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experiment
to
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minimize
the
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risk


4) Sound regulations and legislation to govern the experiments

With these measures, we can
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minimize
the adverse impact on
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animals
without halting the engine of
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scientific
discovery.
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IELTS essay Is it justified to use animals in scientific experiments Explain your answer basis your experience and knowledge and suggest alternatives if any

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