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Why is the climate in Dalat cold and give reasons for the above problem?

Why is the climate in Dalat cold and give reasons for the above problem? m3jaL
Humidity is high because October still has rain, dry weather is dominant. The wind affecting the land at this time is the northeast monsoon. The weather in Dalat is much better and dry. This time is extremely suitable for tourism activities because the weather is cool and dry. Humidity is high because October still has rain, dry weather is dominant. The wind affecting the land at this time is the northeast monsoon. The weather in Dalat is much better and dry. This time is extremely suitable for tourism activities because the weather is cool and dry
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is the northeast monsoon. The
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is much better and
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. Humidity is high
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because
October
still
has rain,
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dry
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weather
is dominant. The wind affecting the land at this
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time
is the northeast monsoon. The
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weather
in
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Dalat
is much better and
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dry
. This
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time
is
extremely
suitable for tourism activities
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because
the
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weather
is cool and
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dry
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IELTS essay Why is the climate in Dalat cold and give reasons for the above problem?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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