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Why is it important to have on more rather than living in a rented house

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Is an undeniable fact that nowdays, it is very essential to have own house rather than living in a hostel and panted Close My opinion it is necessary for living with on vicious I sporty about the action to a major of stand and my explanation is justified in the subsequent paragraph Screen notice it is becoming tend all day just people have on 3 or 4 peak hours in extra level but deep war people can not afford a house that's by the need to live indented Hauer in case of mettur have how have own house is very he watch Who would decide of port in which day have fully free environment at the thing is Deccan note to nothing without the permission of honour even D little human For crashed also become big problem for DE leaving India rented house for instance many people are living in dented house if window was broken by dear children father will be worried to see it he put in a next and depression what the owner will say particularly they can note even do arrangements according on self secondly I will say Out home home have many many fits people and best common go easily without any fret nurse satisfied life can spent in own house in comparison of rented home regiments and even making or developing house or hard necessary by passing the day the can do all things people living in own house if window or wall were scratched or broke note become T sadness or depression for people all there can accomplish or interesting point if the financial status of world massive note make the worst level 50 or owner To summarise in these days all masses must have on our with the Deccan nor live happier and comfortable life of any which all are feel full for the dumb and spent life according to their own wishes
Is an undeniable fact that
nowdays
, it is
very
essential to have
own
house
rather
than
living
in a hostel and panted Close My opinion it is necessary for
living
with on vicious I sporty about the action to a major of stand and my explanation
is justified
in the subsequent paragraph Screen notice it is becoming tend all day
just
people
have on 3 or 4 peak hours in extra level
but
deep war
people
can not afford a
house
that's by the need to
live
indented
Hauer
in case of
mettur
have how have
own
house
is
very
he
watch
Who would decide of port in which day have
fully
free environment at the thing is Deccan
note
to nothing without the permission of
honour
even D
little
human For crashed
also
become
big
problem for DE leaving India rented
house
for instance
many
people
are
living
in dented
house
if window
was broken
by dear children father will
be worried
to
see
it he put in a
next
and depression what the owner will say
particularly
they can
note
even do arrangements
according on
self
secondly
I will say Out
home home
have
many
many
fits
people
and best common go
easily
without any fret nurse satisfied life can spent in
own
house
in comparison
of rented home regiments and even making or developing
house
or
hard
necessary by passing the day
the
can do all things
people
living
in
own
house
if window or wall
were scratched
or broke
note
become T sadness or depression for
people
all there can accomplish or interesting point if the financial status of world massive
note
make
the worst level 50 or owner To
summarise
in these days all masses
must
have on our with the Deccan nor
live
happier and comfortable life of any which all are feel full for the dumb and spent life according to their
own
wishes
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IELTS essay Why is it important to have on more rather than living in a rented house

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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