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Why Families are Important?

Why Families are Important? 2KmKw
Families are a gift that people are blessed with having. Those who are benefited from this heavenly gift sometimes do not know its real value. When we reach adolescence, we try to move away from our family and live all by ourselves; however, we still have strong ties with our beloved families. Whenever we face a problem, the first thing we do is call our family and ask for their help, and this is precisely when we become aware of their actual value once again. But what is the real essence of the family? As once Maya Angelou has said, " I sustain myself with the love of family. " Yes, you guessed correctly, the real element that makes family essential is our bonds; within the family, we love each other unconditionally. Even if we have problems, we may find a way to solve them. Maybe that comes as shocking to you, but current studies show that those living with their families are happier than those living alone. Every family has a strong point; our mother is the glue that sticks our family all together in our family. She has taught us that whatever we are confronting, we should start talking about it and solve it before dinner. Whenever one of us needs a shoulder to cry on, we know where to find one, and it is also worth mentioning that this is also true for my uncles and aunts as well. The only family member that we all believe in is my mother; everyone trusts her. But my real hero is my father, all of us depend on my mother, but who does my mother rely on when she is desperate? That is when my father plays his role. He is the wall that I can lean against it when I feel alone. He is really the man behind the curtain; he makes everything available for us and never takes credit for what he does. And that is what we have learned from him; a father stands beside his family, inspires others with his attitude, and tries to make the best out of everything.
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sometimes
do not know its
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real
value. When we reach adolescence, we try to
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move
away from our
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live
all by ourselves;
however
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still
have strong ties with our beloved
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families
. Whenever we face a problem, the
first
thing we do is call our
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family
and
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ask for
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help
, and this is
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essence of the
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? As once Maya Angelou has said,
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essential is our bonds; within the
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, we
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love
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as shocking to you,
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are happier than those living alone.

Every
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has a strong point; our
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mother
is the glue that sticks our
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all together in our
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family
. She has taught us that whatever we are confronting, we should
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start
talking about it and solve it
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before
dinner. Whenever one of us needs a shoulder to cry on, we know where to find one, and it is
also
worth mentioning that this is
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true for my uncles and aunts
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. The
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only
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family
member that we all believe in is my
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mother
; everyone trusts her.

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my
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hero is my father, all of us depend on my
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mother
,
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who does my
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rely on when she is desperate?
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when my father plays his role. He is the wall that I can lean against it when I feel alone. He is
really
the
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man
behind the curtain; he
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makes
everything available for us and never takes credit for what he does. And
that is
what we have learned from him; a father stands beside his
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family
, inspires others with his attitude, and tries to
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make
the best out of everything.

IELTS essay Why Families are Important?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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