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Do you think that technology has changed the types of leisure activities we enjoy these days?

Do you think that technology has changed the types of leisure activities we enjoy these days? Mqjq6

I admitted that technology brings us a lot of benefits and entertainment. However, along with the development of technology is the loss of the childhood game which people used to play as children. When I was a child, the children in my neighborhood would établished a group to play folk games such as playing hide and seek, Blind man’s buff, Mandarin Square Capturing or even ring the neighbor's bell. And now, that connection has disappeared or faded in modern life. Maybe most children have forgotten or even don't know about those folk games

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